Wow. No takers for reviews, then?

Waah. I thought you guys might review... T___T;;

Hopefully this one'll have more respones. Another one-shot.

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XOXO

:~: Bunny

This one hit me in the middle of English class. What would Seras say once she finally got over her humanity complex and confronted Arucard? I typed it out of my notebook as soon as I got home and posted it. Let me know if you think I got Seras’ character right!! Oh, and a slight AU warning. I fiddled around with some things in canon… like people dying. So sue me! I was bored.

P.S. I know I own nothing. But if you want to be really nice, you can give me Arucard for my birthday!!

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One Hundred Years



I’m not a little girl anymore, Master.

I haven’t been for a long time.

One hundred years is a long time, isn’t it? A long time. Long enough for you to butcher my humanity. To destroy everything I held dear, to completely dominate my will and subject your own. You told me that I was Death, that I had no place with mere humans. You told me that I could rule the world of petty mortals if I truly desired it.

I didn’t.

I didn’t want this Darkness, at first. It would have meant that I had to change who I was, my definition. By drinking blood I would have become a monster. Not human. By refusing, I thought I could have kept some semblance of the person I was. I didn’t understand it then, Master. The Kitten of D-11 was a little girl. Seras Victoria of the Hellsing Organization was, simply, a young lady. The No Life Queen was a woman. You made me grow up, Master. You didn’t let me fail.

They don’t call me Kitten anymore. They call me Vampire. They spit out the word like it left a foul taste, and stare at me with an unparalleled loathing. I miss being Kitten. But I was part of the humanity you took from me. And as my soul slowly drifted away, so did the people I cared about.

There were four.

Ferguson was the first. He gave his life for the Hellsing Organization; a selfless act. He deserves to be remembered, even if it is by a soulless being such as I. He treated me with respect and I returned the favor.

Then Pip. My last effort to retain my hold on humanity was by taking a human lover. I ended up killing him. I murdered him, and left his body among the carrion of London. I’m a monster too, Master. Aren’t you proud?

Walter died next. Perhaps earlier, but I’m not quite sure. All I know is that my Walter, the retainer of the Hellsing family, died when the Neo-Nazis abducted him. Event he Angel of Death succumbed to the mind control chip. Did you enjoy killing him? Was slaughtering the vampiric Angel of Death the highlight of your war?

And Sir Integral Wingates Hellsing. I think you loved her, Master. Does it haunt you at night that you couldn’t save her? That of all the things she survived, after reviving the Hellsing Organization, that she died by the bomb of a human terrorist? It must irk you to no end, Master. You couldn’t save her.

I couldn’t save any of them.

I became the perfect Vampire for you, Master. One hundred years of servitude made me that. I wouldn’t change it, though. If I had a second chance, all those years ago in Cheddar, I would have still said yes. I would have done anything for you, Master.

But now after one hundred years I finally learned everything you could teach me. You were my Master, and I was yours. Your pupil, your servant, your companion, your slave. One hundred years, and you’re all I have left in this world.

I hate you, Arucard.

I want my freedom.

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So, whadd’ya think? Just review! It’s easy. Press the little button and write “Good” or “Bad.” See? It’s not that hard! And it makes me a very happy author. Reviews will be inshrined in silver cases, criticism welcomed, and flames with be used to burn newspapers. Have a nice day ^ 0 ^


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:~: Bunny

Hellsing? Check.
Dark style of writing? Check.
Totally wicked story? You bet!! ...I mean "Check"!

I really like how this one turned out, despite the fact that you thought of it during English class. Nothing wrong with that! Actually, some of my better works were thought up during class too! :laugh:

But frankly, I like how dark this is. Not only that, she ... she seems to be devoid of all feelings even though that "I hate you, Arucard." line proves otherwise. I like how you made it so that there were moments when you could actually picture her taking a deep breath and organizing her thoughts before continuing.

Again, a great job, BloodyBunny! Keep up the good work and keep 'em coming!

Thanks, babe!

You seem to be the only one reviewing. It makes me sad. T___T;; You ALL must review! I command thee!

But thanks for more stroking to my ego, Jerzi. I need it ^^;; Keep up the stroking! (( That sounded a lot less perverted in my head... o.o;; )

I honestly don't know what I was on when I wrote this, but I like it. And you like it. So that's good. I've always hated it when they make Seras weak in most fanfictions... she's a frickin' vampire. She's gotta suck it up at some point.

Anyway, thanks again!


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:~: Bunny

I personally don't get the fic, but heck! It's well written and there's vampires! Me love vamps! And about the ego strokin', I'm officially rating you "PG-13" for suggestive content! Anyways nice fic, and the only thing I'm strokin', is a cute, little kitty... and please try to stay away from the naughty stuff... there are minors here y'know(like me...)

Merely saying it the way I see it! :amused:

You really are a talented writer. Even though you've only posted up two short stories so far, I've enjoyed them both immensely. I haven't had the chance to come across such well written works for a while.

You know, from the way that you explain how you came to writing these stories, it sounds like you haven't been putting much effort into them. If that is indeed the case, I would love to read something where you put your heart and soul into. :bigsmile:

As for giving you Arucard for your birthday... I would, if he would bloody stop trying to gnaw on my arm. :notrust:

But I know what you mean about people making her out to be a weakling. Ionno, maybe it's because of how she is. There are times when she gives off the impression as being ... not up to par with others. Or maybe that's just me. In which case, ignore my babblings. :cheesy:

Don't... get... it...

You've never seen or read "Hellsing"?!?! T__T;;

What utter shame you must live in.

What part didn't you get, though? I might be able to clarify.

"PG-13"? Rather tame... ^^;; At least I haven't earned myself an "XXX" yet. Yet being operative word. ^ . ~

Stroking the kitty? *Laughs insanely.* You've been more suggestive then I have (( Has no one else done the kitty on the lap joke? Stroke the kitty... stab the kitty... and it's on your lap... nevermind )). But I don't blame you. We are all slaves to hormones. Unlesss you're gay. And then you're slave to... gay-ness.

Wow. This is such a bad review response... *Sulks and mutters.*


XOXO

:~: Bunny

I finished responding to RinRin... then Jerzi's showed up.

Yay! I'm popular. And keep commencing with the ego stroking. I'm throughly enjoying it. ^ - ^

Arucard is gnawing on your arm?! *Swoons.* Give him to me!! *Becomes his willing slave.*

... I'd do it, too. Really. I'm quite serious.

I know Seras comes of weak in some places, but methinks it's a reflection of her empathy towards humans. I mean, Arucard sired her and she's been training with the Hellsing Organization. How weak can she be?!


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:~: Bunny

Don't nag! ...I've never seen it either! lol...but that doesn't matter.

Hm..I'm going to review as if the idea was fresh and everything, initially was just made up, by you. Since I had no background information on it, I think it is quite appropriate.

First off, I enjoyed the opening paragraph. Since I didn't have any background information from me never reading/seeing anything pertaining to it, as I read the 1st paragraph, It made my mind curious. I had no idea what it was talking about, but the words made me curious.

The second paragraph, played very nicely right after the 1st. It gave me information that I lacked earlier to know what it was talking about.

The rest then, is just dialogue. I bet I can appreciate and understand the rest though if I do my homework and actually see a movie though. So, I'll let others discuss that area.

So overall, pretty good..would have been better had I known exactly what was occuring...my fault. :amused:

I'm aghast. None of you know Hellsing?

I command you all to buy the manga and worship Arucard!!

The world is cruel, and you are under privileged.

Thanks for the review, though! ^ - ^


XOXO

:~: Bunny

Well, first off Bloody Bunny, I haven't had a chance to greet you to the board yet :blush: My bad :sad:

So welcome aboard! And enjoy the show :whip:

As for your fanfiction right here, I must say that I've read many Hellsing FFs (being a HUGE fan myself) and this isn't bad at all. I like the way Seras Victoria describes herself as being Kitten and...well...not so kitten anymore. You've got her character right, and its somewhat plausible that Seras might hate Alucard at the end. Dark mood, dark feelings. Nice setting.

If this is a fanfiction you wrote in seconds, I wonder what kind of work you can come up with in a day, or a week! :interest: You are obviously talented. And these fanfics are amazing. Keep up the great work, I'm looking foward to see more of your work. :amused:

Aww... thanks! ^^;;

You all spoil me with such kind reviews. Now, there just needs to be more! Bwahaha!!

*Coughs.* Yeah, sorry 'bout that >>;;

Anyway, squee! Another Hellsing fan. It means even more coming from someone who knows the cannon.

Mwa! Cuddles for the review!!


XOXO

:~: Bunny