this is my poem please go easy on me since its my first time posting in awhile (and on my poem if you think its lame)

Freinds
I admired you from afar
everyone knew i loved you
when i told you in a poem
you knew it was me and instead of lying
or running away you said
lets be freinds instead
i was surpised and so happy
but i had to move away and i never said goodbye
i really miss you because you were a good freind
i will always wish the best for you
i hope we will always be freinds
no matter how far away i go

(might be lame but go easy on me its my first time)

Awww Zero56 theres no need to belittle yourself its a great poem for your first go me really liked it..kepp trying you will improve but great for a first try :smile:

heres another one (go easy on it i'm still new to this)

Always
I will always wish the best for you
may you have many blessings
I wish i could see your smiling face
I still love you very much
I wish you were here
Because i always wish the best for you
All i do is daydream about you
How i listend to you laugh
and how i will wish the best
May you be healthy when you go out on your own
And hope you wont ever get hurt
Maybe my dream will come true someday
You'll be happy with or without me
of course but if it made you happy
I would watch from afar and hope for the best
You'll always be happy thats what i hope

(go easy on it second time i've posted a poem)

Wow Zero56, this is a really good poem. Only your second poem? :lost: That's amazing! I look forward to reading more! :bigsmile:
God Bless,
Souba

Anouther good poem! your very good at this lol..keep it up me wanty to read more!!!

ok third poem ( i'm still sorta new to this)

Forever your Friend
I will always be your friend
no matter how far apart we are
when your sad i'll cheer you up
i will always be your freind
no matter what
if you get hurt i will do everything i can to help
Because i'm your freind
If something were to happen to you
i would be sad
Because your my Best friend
Even though i love you
You said lets be freinds
You knew i loved you
and we're still freinds,
and We'll be freinds forever
How ever long that may be

(third times a charm right?)