something inside of my is building benieth the surface
something is confusing me into what is real

against my own will
i stand against my own reflection

these wounds are going to be real
this fear is tearing my heart apart

the fear of this never ending
the pain of this never fading

fear is how i fall

i felt this way before
so insecure

i ask for what is real

i can't hear
i can't see
i can't feel
i can't ........

i don't know why but the curtains are always closing on me

i'm searching my mind
trying to start again

i don't know whats worth fighting for
i don't want to be the one to be this

i don't know why i came this far
knowing i will never be alright

i'm the who always fall
why don't i just scream
why don't i just cry

i'm lost in my own fictions and dreams of reality

i know the clock ticks
and i'm keeping everything locked up inside of me

i tried so hard but
it deosn't even matter how much i try

i pushed as far as i can go
i tried so hard and got so far

i had to fall to lose it all

now i will finally rest from all of this
death is the only place for me.........
i have no where i belong to....

wow this is a nice poem/song :smile:
did u write it urself ....?
when i was reading it i thought that is was a compilation of several songs
like the line "i felt this way before so insecure" reminds me of the song "crawling" and the line "i had to fall to lose it all" reminds of "in the end" by linkin park .
Anyways it's nice .... :smile:

As dwindlinglights pointed out, it does remind me of several songs. Most notable are the ones she already said. There are a few more but I can't remember the titles at the moment.

As I said with the other one, you need to stay with the beat that you establish. By breaking the beat, you're making it harder for the reader to really understand what you're trying to say.

Umm... Jerzi , u kind of made me a male when u said "Most notable are the ones he already said. ummm... i dont wanna be a cry baby but i'm a female ....its okay if it was a typing mistake :smile:

I apologize for that, dwindlinglights. :push: I was very tired (still am) and I had an extremely long and hard day. I promise it won't happen again in the future.