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Old Jan 29th, 2008   #1
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This is more of an original thing than an fanfic. First story I've written so I'm sorry if it isn't that great.
Chapter 1
Its Metallicy Blue fur shoned in the moonlight. Clouds moved over the forest and blotted out the moon as it ran through the woods. Panting as it ranned, jumped, ducked through the trees and thier roots as it escaped from humans. It was a wolf, bigger than most and shone brightly. The wolf stopped at the cliff. Trapped. The wolf appeared to be doomed as the humans closed in. There were seven. All held a gun, mostly rifles. They took aim and pulled the trigger. The gun made birds scatter away as the bullet went towards the wolf. There was one problem..the wolf had disappeared. The humans looked around looking for thier prey and came with a horrible relization. They had became the prey now. They dashed back through the woods, but thier efforts didn't save them. The wolf appeared in front of the lead man. The creature pounced at him, biting deep into his neck. The man's windpipe collapsed and the wolf attacked two more. The others, abandoning thier comrades, ran out of the woods and escaped. The wolf...satisfied with the fate of these three hunters, disappeared without a trace except for the three bodies. It appeared by itself at first in a hidden cavern under the Earth. A man appeared dressed in robes of blue and silver. "Well done my wolf," the man in a low tone said. The wolf transformed...transformed into a blue, metal clock. The man walked up and grabbed the clock. After the clock was picked up, he was gone.

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Clocks...clocks...clocks...everywhere clocks. The old man walked down the halls of all time. Every second...made here..everyone's life lasted in the clocks of this man. Who was he? What was he doing here? There was that same wolf again...trotting along side with the man. The man reached down and petted it. "Nothing but clocks here...calm down,"The man calming the wolf said. They continued down the hall when a woman dressed in robes of snow white appeared in the central room. "What are you doing here Les'Kes! THIS IS MY REALM!" The man yelled violently. The woman, apparently Les'Kes, replied,"You may rule time..but you don't rule all."The old man continued to walk down his hallway. "What do you need anyways you witch," The man rudily said. "I need help from a few saviors of yours to help some of my chosens," Les'Kes calmly and softly said. "Hmph....me helping the light...I'm a neutral power!" The old man exclaimed. "Anteoo! Your the key to this war, you can help us win!" Les'Kes yelled at him. Both fell silent. Then two more beings appeared. "What are you doing in my halls. MY HALLS! MEET SOMEWHERE ELSE DAMNIT!" Anteoo in anger yelled. One that wielded flames said,"Calm Anteoo, we are here to get help, for now we are losing and need your help." "Bah, if I am the one who can decide your fate, what need is it for the Judge," Anteoo mockingly sneered. Then two dark figures appeared. One holding a coin, another holding the souls of the damn.
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Chapter 3
Bodies laid on the ground in a warbattered forest. Morters constantly rained fire down onto the planet. None have seen such a war as this since the Demon Gate Wars. Human and elven soldiers, claded in leather armor in distinct green, marched along with rifles. Dwarves, who've been long intragated into human society, continued to make more helmets for the solders. Bodies were counted and names wrote down. Commanders yelling, trying to get order within this camp that was full of panic and choas from the morters, were quickly calmed down and begun a foward march up a steep slope. Behind them, they towed a giant mechinism. The soldiers continued to pull until soldiers claded in red jumped out and fired a blast, killing the men and elves in the front immeaditely. Skirmishes broke out across the entire mountian as more ambushes appeared.
Meanwhile, back in the golden halls, other figures appeared from rooms, beginning to commence thier daily business. Many grabbed pocket watches from nearby shelves as the beings argued. The arguement was about who would be able to gain services from Anteoo himself. The old man himself walked away and sat down, mumbling about how the contraptions always gave him backsores. He sat next to a doorway which showed a golden room, with a window revealing stars and planets. The room itself was filled with golden bookcases with books lining each one. These books had many titles, ranging from the histories of many planets, including Kessia, Gorgoth, and Earth I, III, and VI. Golden Gears constantly turned and pendulums swung. The day wore on as the gods bickered and bickered.
At the end of the day, bodies lay everywhere, but it was evident that the greencladed army had won as they bought the mechanism to the top of the mountian to a cliff. Trenches below them laid everywhere, showing constant struggles and skirmishes. As soon as the mechanism was hooked and locked onto the mountian, it fired a sphere projectile, and upon explosion, it released thousands of needles into a trench. More greenclad soldiers ran over the open, desolate ground towards it, firing thier rifles at enemy soldiers trying to regain thier footing and others trying to reinforce that trench. Soon, it became a bloody melee. Bayonets and knives flashes in the setting sunlight as the sun disappeared behind the mountians, giving rise to the two moons. Screams and yelling of the dieing prevailed over any other noises as bodies begun to fill the trenches. By the end, it was still a stalemate.
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Old Jan 29th, 2008   #2
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Re: The Wolf of Time

Since you claim to have already read the rules, I suggest you read them thoroughly again. While you are doing that, pay special attention to #20. Double posting is exactly what you did. Please be more careful in the future.

After checking out the rules again, you should also read the guidelines Daeya has set for the Fanfiction Library. Particularly, she clearly stated "a new thread should be created for each story."

For the moment, I have merged both posts due to the fact that I unsure of what your actions may be. Should you choose to, you can edit your current post and make a new thread for your new story.

Again, please be more careful in the future.
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Re: The Wolf of Time

Fine, I'm sorry for what I've done and I hope to not do it again unknowningly.
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